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   is
the rustle
of sheets
when you
drag them
back onto
the bed;

   is
the way
dust trips
the dark
fantastic on
velvet stretched
into more
than blue;

   is
thick marrow
soured with
acid reflux,
a raging
waveless ocean
turned to
wine with
the twilight.


And tremors...
And tremors.
Inspiration: "I'm Glad There Is You," by Alan Pasqua, Dave Carpenter and Peter Erskine. The album is Standards.

Until this moment, I had never had an instrumental piece sink so effortlessly and painfully into my chest as this one has. Wonderful. :heart:
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:iconrestlesssands:
hello,

ive featured this in my journal :) : [link]

:heart:
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AMWeitz Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks so much! I'm so honored! :heart: :worship: :heart:
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:iconv-espertine:
this is beautiful work. it's surprising when everything falls into its right place right away.
how much writing sometimes feels like, i don't know, there's no way to put it, like being animated and dispossessed at the same time.
i need to go listen to some jazz <3
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AMWeitz Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
It makes me so, so happy that this poem makes you want to listen to jazz! :)
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:iconv-espertine:
they can't help but go together. really nice work. (:
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AMWeitz Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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tickersymbol Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know this feeling...and though words may not be necessary, yours brought the moment back into perfect recollection...thank you.
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AMWeitz Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, it means a great deal to me that you think so. Thank you for taking the time to post such a meaningful comment. :heart:
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tickersymbol Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :)
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